09 Nov Board Memo 1
I want you to revise my Board Memo 1 which I got 120/150. The professor put the comments "You’re supposed to direct it to the board- voice should be different."
I am attaching my Board Memo 2 whic hI got 150/150. Please read it and fix Board Memo 1 based on the comment. I really need the perfect score. Thank you.
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Quality of analysis
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60 / 60 pts
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Quality and quantity of esearch
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Comments
You need to support all of your statements like about capacity building, sustainability, leadership development- need a citation.
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40 / 60 pts
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Quality of the Presentation
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Be consistent in citation style. Hard to follow in places.
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20 / 30 pts
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