The proposal does not offer a clear plan for addressing the space debris problem, the main task of the document. (By contrast, your oral presentation offers a better sense of a comprehensive project, and so I suggest that you look there to get an idea of what was missing from the main proposal itself.)

Please Revise and Edit the paper, based off the professors comments above. Use the Oral Presentation Powerpoint attached below as reccomended in comment. Please Highlight your changes