I’m working on a Business exercise and need support.

Asian philosophy proposal

Here is the comment from the professor.

OK, I still have some concerns. First, please find parts of the Buddhist texts that talk about service to the community. Also I recommend that you take on one or two of these, not all of them. Finally what are you hoping to achieve? Is it about suffering or service?

You will need to find more sources to rewrite the assignment about how you have practiced Buddhism. you also need to find the sources that support the claim. The researches need to be revised completely.

Also, try not to be too broad, just talk about one thing you are trying to practice in buddism

Requirements: Edit the paper | .doc file