12 Aug The Scandinavian Show The Bridge (you must have watched the first season of the show)
need you to fix this whole essay please see the improvements i got from my professor: “I have attached your second draft with my mark ups and comments. As you can see, I don’t think all the information about the MAKING of the TV series are relevant to your thesis. Therefore I think you should delete them from your introduction and focus on the gender/inequality aspects of your paper.
Also, you tend to make very general statements without backing them up. Some of your statements are actually wrong. See my comments.”
i need you to use specific examples from the show please make this an interesting essay I have attached an essay (actually two) from last semester. See how the student organizes her essays in direct, short paragraphs and makes her points clear. And she stays focused. I hope this helps as the subject matter is similar to what you are trying to write. See her paragraph on Saga. (In the first essay it is 4th paragraph!) No outside sources should be used!
