Instructions:

Submit the final draft of your Personal Essay here. The points you earn will replace the points you earned for the previous draft.  

Please note that there are 10 points in the rubric for revision alone. To earn a high score in that area, your paper must show effort. That means you must make substantial revisions in Phases 1 and 2, even if you were satisfied with your previous score. Adding a new paragraph will earn more points than adding a sentence here and there. Just changing a few words or fixing a few grammatical errors is not going to improve your previous score.  For more information about that, see Final Revision Overview.

Before submitting your final revision, highlight additions to your paper that are at least one sentence in length.