07 Jul The migrant crisis represents the greatest contemporary challenge to the stability of the European Union. Discuss.
Below the comments that I received for my essay so I will need some help to restructure it to fit into the critireas shared by the instructor.
The essay shows some understanding ofthe themes and concepts covered in the module, but insufficient ability toapply them to answer the question chosen. The essay does not answer the question that ask you to discussif the migration crisis represents the greatest challenge to the stability ofthe EU. In order to answer it, you should have presented the other side of theargument. Moreover, you could have compared the impact of the migration crisiswith the one of other issues that pose a threat to the stability of the EU.
The assignmentcontains some interesting points on migration, but it tends to be extremelydescriptive. The argument is not sufficiently developed and not clearlypresented. I strongly encourage you to work more on this point.
