8.8.21 8.8.21 Maria, thank you for resubmitting your paper.  There is little change from the first and second submissions.  I am not sure  you fully understand the instructions.  Please review them carefully and let me know what questions you have and if I may help you in any way.  Please see my comments and tracked changes for all 3 of the submissions.  Thank you. Dr. Weeks

8.5.21 Maria, there are some changes to the paper but the missing elements and those sections with little detail remain the same.  Please review the instructions.  You should have a heading in your paper for each section of the instructions.  This would assure that no elements are missing.  Be sure to include details about the screening as well as a full cost analysis.  Let me know if you have questions.  Thank you, Dr. Weeks

8.2.21 Maria, this is a good beginning but does not meet the requirements of the assignment.  Please read the instructions and course readings.  You were to use the topics in the instructions as the headings for your paper.  Certain sections, such as conceptual model and cost are missing.  The reason for the screening is explained well, but this is to be about a specific screening, how it is set up, the cost, etc.  Your paper has a lot of good information about obesity, but does not address the specific screening.