I have attached my action research final. I need it corrected/fixed according to these suggestions. I have fixed a few of these things. After I submitted my action research paper this was the feedback and changes requested. If you can help please let me know. If not please do not waste my time. Thank you. Please look over the instructions and my paper to fully understand what is being aske when bidding.
You are misiing the statement of problem section. Too much spacing between sections. Purpose section needs a purpose statement- the purpose of this study is to ….. Bullet points on research questions are far too large. There should not be a significance section but you do need a methodology section in chp 1. All chapters should start on a new page. Lit review must be at least 6 full pages. Every section should have at least 2 different cited sources and there is extra spacing again. Methodlogy should be chapter 3. Participants needs to specify the number of people involved, their ages, genders, ethnicities, and geographic locations. Data collection needs a step by step explanation. Instrumentation needs everything you will use to collect data. Data analysis needs to explain the specific methods- test, etc. and should not have quotes. Remove the limitations. Results should not be in past tense bc you have not conducted this study. There should be no ethical considerations section. References have formatting errors and if it is listed then it must have been cited int the paper.
You are misiing the statement of problem section. Too much spacing between sections. Purpose section needs a purpose statement- the purpose of this study is to ….. Bullet points on research questions are far too large. There should not be a significance section but you do need a methodology section in chp 1. All chapters should start on a new page. Lit review must be at least 6 full pages. Every section should have at least 2 different cited sources and there is extra spacing again. Methodlogy should be chapter 3. Participants needs to specify the number of people involved, their ages, genders, ethnicities, and geographic locations. Data collection needs a step by step explanation. Instrumentation needs everything you will use to collect data. Data analysis needs to explain the specific methods- test, etc. and should not have quotes. Remove the limitations. Results should not be in past tense bc you have not conducted this study. There should be no ethical considerations section. References have formatting errors and if it is listed then it must have been cited int the paper.