09 Nov Personal Statement
I require a personal statement to apply to the following programme: https://ug.hkubs.hku.hk/admission/degree-programmes/hku-pku-dual-degree
I have attached a first draft of the personal statement and the details and background of the applicant. However, it is not good enough and I want you to, based on the information provided, rewrite a better and more persuasive version.
Feel free to exaggerate the background and achievements of the applicant, within reason.
