Go back to the paper, view my comments, and write a brief self-report that does the following things:
1. Identify and describe briefly the one thing you could focus on most to better please your reader and get a better grade on the next essay. 2. Fix one simple problem in the paper and just include that little portion of the original paper in your brief report. 3. What specific aspect of Essay #2 did you work hard to improve over Essay #1.
