15 Aug The influence of fashion
Read my draft essay on the topic “The influence of Fashion”. The document “essay” is my essay. I need to make some edits, you can see in the document “essay edit” highlighted sentences and comment on them. Feel free to add one more source if you need in addition to my sources. Make sure it came out 8-9 pages at the end. Look through and make sure I am not contradicting myself, and that I back up my reasoning with citations. There are some things highlighted that need to be backed up.
Also remember to read through for awkwardly worded sentences, there aren’t a lot here, but there are a few.
