You have a good idea for your research, but you need to bear down on what variables you are investigating, find previous studies that have also investigated those variables, and include them in the literature review. I have made extensive comments in the comment bubbles in your document and on the graded rubric. Please read them asap.

I HAVE UPLOADED THE PAPER, FEEDBACK, AND RUBRIC FOR PSY 224

ALSO I HAVE UPLOADED ANOTHER PAPER, FEEDBACK, AND RUBRIC TO REDO FOR ATH 101