Hi, this is not an essay it is an academic paper, introduction has to have thesis, you can talk about oral health for example cancer screening, brushing flossing etc. The general health in your personal perspective not only according to the WHO′s, ex sleeping exercising and smoking etc and its effect on general health. The relationship between oral health and general health. how did the dental hygiene program help grow within the program. Summarize all the thesis. PLEASE read the old uploaded Philosophy paper so you can make a REVISED (the purpose to create a revised copy from the old paper) copy that attached along with the rubric. Please make sure to follow the rubric as it explains my instruction and everything in details. 

Please make sure to add references and in-text citation for every resource used, using Vancouver style