In a sentence, can you summarize your main takeaway from the submission?

What aspects of the submission do you enjoy? Remember that in peer feedback, you are not being asked whether you agree/disagree with the writer's ideas. You are being asked to address how well the writer is communicating his/her/their ideas.

Give the writer at least 2 suggestions for revisions. Revision suggestions should be more significant than "use a synonym here or there." If you found a certain paragraph confusing or unclear, you might suggest for the writer to re-write that paragraph more clearly. If you think that the writer made a really interesting point that you'd like to see expanded upon, suggest that. Please make specific references to your peer's submission by quoting or referencing specific paragraphs.